Tuesday, May 15, 2012

Six Sketches

A Good Story

This is a story about three kids, two of them were very good at drawing. The third one was not good at drawing but was very good in making stories.

I don't like this story because it is boring and it is not creative.


Beatrice Mika
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1 comment:

  1. Teacher Alexandre CaféMay 22, 2012 at 3:05 PM

    Hi Beatrice,

    Sorry to now you didn't like the story. I hope you can enjoy it next time you have to read a book, :)
    I underlined some words on your writing. Take a look and try to correct them.

    Thanks

    Alé Café

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